Paul Neu

Dallas, Texas

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A Poetic Masterpiece

I was pulled in by the vivid (and disturbing) imagery and musical prose from the start. I found myself reading aloud to get the full effect. You captured the spirit of Poe well and the antagonist’s enthusiastic madness was quite contagious. This is definitely one of my favorites. Well done!

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You Set the Mood Well

Awesome job on setting up the mood and tension. Being chased by a stranger, being lost, all terrifying in and of themselves. Add in not being able to see a thing, it only amps up the terror. Good job!

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