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WOW

I'm so thrilled to see another award ceremony in Inkitt. This is great for the writers. Thank you so much for hosting this!

Enriching

I have started reading this story and I'm thoroughly enjoying my read. The book's setting, character, and the plot is done with utmost brilliance and I can't help but fall in love. However, there were countless tense and punctuation errors that needs to be paid attention. Also, you need to focus on the descriptions a little. Show, not tell. Other than that, you're doing great! Keep it up!!

Requirement fulfilled

This story is what I needed after a lot of hyped and stressed day. The writing is eloquent and so are the characters. Looking forward to seeing more of your work my talented buddy. ❤️🙌

A promising book

This book has a great start and a beautiful potential. The author is talented and her narration skills are fantastic. I'm in love with her writing style. It's so enchanting 😍 Just some small grammatical errors here and there, but hey we all are learning. So don't worry they can easily be fixed by light editing. An overall amazing read and would love to see more of your work 🙌❤️

A promising potential

I found the plot quite intriguing and the lead character is also not the typical good little girl which is a fabulous start to the story by the way. The start was really amazing and I think it could be a little better if you can focus on the small grammatical errors here and there. But hey, no judgements here. It was only a friendly suggestion. Because it is a good book, and seeing it lacking in the ranks due to the grammar would be a shame. Hope you get my point. You're doing really good though. Keep it up 💪❤️☺️

Amazing work but needs polishing!

You have a really amazing voice and plot out there. However, I do think that it needs a bit of polishing to shine the way it deserves. Otherwise, you're doing great work! Keep it up! :)

Just mind blowing!

This book has got me hooked since the very beginning and I don't what else to say. The amazing setting of the plot, the beautiful character developments, and the vivid descriptions made this book a treat to read. The pacing also sits well with the book and I enjoyed every moment of it! Good job author!!♥

HAAWWT

The plot absolutely messed with my head and emotions. I really loved all the characters and especially how the story flows. The pace is excellent and allows the readers to catch up. Great job!!♥

Great job

The author did a marvelous job in portraying Lucifer's character. He was hot and cold which was the perfect combination. I also liked Hope and her character develops throughout the plot. The story also flows well and the chemistry between the characters is undeniable. The author did a good job with the story! All the best!

Great job!

Interesting story with becoming characters. Looking forward to more of the book. All the best!

Sweet and relaxing

The book had been a great one so far. I've just started reading it and I can't stop. The author did a great job to hook in the readers with her writing capability. Looking forward to more of your work. All the best!

Nice

The plot is enchanting and the author's writing style and descriptive skills are mesmerizing. The dialogues are also fluent and believable. I look forward to reading more of your work. Keep it up! 🙌

Magically perfect

The book is actually interesting and something that I would definitely read. Given me not being into this werewolf genre, this one caught my attention easily and I'm glad that I read this. The author has skillfully weaved the readers into this beautiful world. Great job author. Keep up the good work and all the best!!! 🙌🙌

Dope

Cute and interesting story. Keep it up!

Interesting

The beginning was a bit confusing but later it was cleared up by the author. There were few grammatical errors here and there but a final edit can fix em up. The author has done an amazing job of portraying the character Lucy and bringing her to Life. Looking forward to more of your works. Keep it up! 🙌

Totally refreshing and riveting

I seriously love this book. I really like the way the plot flows and the characters develop as well as their backgrounds. I really like Velvette's mom. Damn she is the future me 😂. But jokes aside, this book has the potential to reach to great limits if proper attention is paid to the punctuation and paragraph layouts. With that being said I am really looking forward to the next updates. Great job author. Keep it up! 🙌

Intriguing

This book is perfect for fantasy lovers as it just has fresh content. The storyline, the plot, and the characters are also developed in a beautiful way. However, there were some unanswered questions regarding the MC. Also, not to mention the frequent grammatical and punctuation errors. But that's nothing to worry as it can be fixed with proofreading and editing. Other than that, I believe the author has done a pretty good job. All the best!♥

Nice

The story has the potential and perfect setting. The characters and their dynamics are also well-rounded. However, the countless grammatical and punctuation errors make it very difficult to follow the story smoothly. But, you don't need to worry about that as it can be fixed with final editing. Keep up the good work!

A total charmer!

This book! This book was a lot of emotions to be honest. Funny, romantic, heartbreaking, to be precise it was a roller coaster. And I was glad to be a part of it. The author's writing style is so vivid that I could literally feel myself standing there. Through every little picturesque. I loved the book despite not being into the genre much. There were a few grammatical errors but that can be fixed with editing. So nothing to worry. Great job author! Keep it up! ❤️❤️

Brilliant

I love the way you write and the story progression. The characters are so humane and the plotline is so dark yet irresistible. I love this! Looking forward to more updates 😊

Mind-blowing

This story is quite intriguing and different from other stories I've read. You've got an amazing plot going for you. There were some minor errors but nothing that can't be fixed with a small editing. Great job! Can't wait for the next chapters!

Sweet!

This book has a brilliant start and I really like V's character. However, there are quite a few grammatical errors, but that's nothing to worry about as it could be fixed with simple editing. You're doing great. Keep it up!

I'm so so hooked

This book has enchanted me since the very first line. And the character of the burglar is potrayed with brilliance. The writing style is so cajoling that you can almost feel yourself in that scenario. Looking forward to more of this adventure. Keep it up!!

Enthralled

The writing style and the female lead were the main things that enchanted me. The plot thickens by the end, and even though it's a little familiar, the author's writing style keeps you engaged. Keep writing!! All the best! 🙌🙌

Didn't meet my expectations

This is completely from my point of view, so I don't want anybody to get offended. I had high expectations from this book but sadly, it wasn't that good. I actually loved it in the beginning but I think the shine reduced in the end. Anyway, It was an okay read.

An absolute different hit!

Being a writer of the vampire genre, I have to say that this one has brilliant potential as the plot is super intriguing and different from the normal ones. The author puts you in a captivating trance with her writing style. Except for a few grammatical (such as punctuations and tense) errors, which can be fixed with a light editing, I think this book is just perfect for dark fantasy lovers!! Keep up the good work!! 🙌🙌

Good start

The story is quite appealing and I actually enjoyed the read. However, there were few plotholes and I felt that at some parts the story got rushed. Although, the plot is brilliant and I'm excited about the next updates. You're doing good, just editing some of those parts would make the story easier to understand for the readers. Keep up the good work!! All the best!! 🙌

Epic

That's exactly what I felt after completing the book. The book has been a perfect roller-coaster ride of adventure and emotions. There were a few grammatical errors but as the author said that she's editing, so I believe it's gonna come out in the best form. All the best for the future. Keep up the good work!! 🙌❤

A good start

The best thing about the book is the protagonist, Rose. She's not only badass but also cruel, just like how a vampire should be. So, it's a fresh one. However, there are a few grammatical errors but nothing that can't be fixed with small editing. Keep it up!!

Cute

The story has good potential because it's sweet and charming. It also portrays that no matter the misunderstandings, true love always finds its worth. However, there are a few suggestions I would like to make:
1. You should increase the length of each chapter. Despite it being a short story, you can focus on the setting of the environment, the characters, their background. In short, be more descriptive.
2. There are also a lot of grammatical errors but that's nothing to worry. It can be fixed with thorough editing.
With these points, in mind, I think the story can reach its true potential.
Overall, your book was engaging and I liked reading it. Wish you all the best for your future!!!

Potential at it's best

I have started reading your book and it's been a fun read for me so far. Your plot, though familiar is very engaging and keeps the reader captivated. However, I would recommend you to fix the minute grammar and punctuation errors that you have. A little editing is all you need. Anyway, you're being an amazing author so keep up the good work 🙌❤️

Enthralling

A different and engaging plot with becoming characters. The time I spent on the novel was worth it! Keep up the good work!!

Rich potential

This book is really good . The plot, the characters, the setting, everything is done with utmost brilliance. However, I would suggest you to pay a little more attention to your grammar and small writing parts. I felt that if the paragraphs could be more descriptive, then story would really reach it's peak. Also , at some parts, the writing is a little childish and lacks the descriptive nature. Sometimes, the story feels too rushed due to the writing and so you need to pay attention to the details. And if you keep these in mind, I think your book is going to come out better.

Interesting

I'm not really into Eroticas but this was a little different than others and to be honest, I thoroughly enjoyed it Prescilla's character was fresh and natural but so was Arnold's and I loved their chemistry. Overall, this was a fresh one :)
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A smooth read!

The story has a great start and brilliant potential. You have an amazing narration as you describe your scenes beautifully. But one thing I would suggest you is that include spaces between the paragraphs so that it is easy to distinguish. Also small edits can fix the minute typos you have. And I absolutely love love/hate relationships so I'm totally in for it. Looking forward to more of this! ❤️🙌

Swooning

The story has a very unique approach and the author's capability of weaving the characters so perfectly leaves me speechless. An amazing read overall. Though there are a few grammatical errors here and there but that's not gonna be a problem with a simple editing. Overall, I'm really and genuinely impressed with the storyline and looking forward to see how it eventually turns out. ❤️🙌

An addictive read.

I don't think I have words to describe your narration. They are totally swoon-worthy. And the plot is so fresh and unique. The characters are well rounded and the scenes that you are setting are so vivid that I can almost feel myself in there. You're doing an amazing job and I'm really looking forward to the updates cause this got me so hooked. All the best!

Brilliance on point

This is the first werewolf book I tried and to my surprise I loved every single bit of it. The book has everything. The gory details, the action, the badass heroin and I love Hunter cause he's so adorable. This book has a whole lot potential.

But I would like to give you a friendly suggestion that is to be more descriptive so the reader can imagine the scenario vividly. Also some minor grammatical errors here and there, but without these this is a mind blowing story, cause you're damn the talent hun.

You're really doing amazing 😍. So keep it up hun. ❤️🙌

A unexpected fondness

A beautiful story with a beautiful plot. I love angels and demons story but this was really new and I loved it more. At first I thought this was a love story but the author successfully proved me wrong 😂 The author's brilliance of writing the story in such a way to hook the readers is mind-blowing. The characters are deep and have lots of shades. And Dante is the bad boy in every true sense of the words. 😉 A must read for every fantasy lover out there!☺️❤️🙌

A much needed read

The story was really a fresh read and intriguing. We often hate on the Queen Bee but never knew their perspective. I absolutely love Wesley and Avery both as individuals and couple. And Winnie is literally me. The revelation near the end was heartbreaking and I really cried in the end. This book was so good and it's worthy of the late nights I spent reading. Thanks so much for the awesome work 🙌❤️