Sana

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Complicated

I loved this book in the beginning but as it went forward it got confusing and complicated. There are so many characters that I literally can't remember them. Vampires, witches, werewolves, stars and nobles ; one can easily get bored or confused.
I have read this book upto 19 Chaps and I'm leaving it from here.
Besides vast characters one thing that I hated is Lyra being described as supernatural and a super power alpha although she is never shown like that.
The plot and beginning of this novel was superb but the book had been very amazing had the author not included vast variety.

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Perfect

I liked , rather loved the book. The suspense and the romance and the plot were just perfectly synced. Character of Drew was most impressive as he disliked then liked then loved Cora. But the truth of her parent's death didn't get that much revealed. Yet overall it was an amazing story.

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Good but could be made better

The story goes unnecessarily long and also fails in clarifying a lot of points. Creepy part is well written . The story would be better if added clarity and more twists.

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Average

I didn't find anything captivating or interesting. There were only a few twists. And the story did move around a very small place not adding much fun.
You should focus on turns and twists and more than average story.

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Excellent

The story just holds the reader while listening to the 'voices '.
Excellent writing styles and intense feelings described are the things making the reader glued to the 'voices'.

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Captivating

I liked the way the reader is not allowed to leave the story even at the end of the chapter.
Twists and thrills, ups and downs , love and hatred ; this story has just everything in one place.
Loved it.

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