petiteyoyo

Amazing Writing Style

I loved your writing style and word use. The word use made it interesting and more enjoyable. It was confusing when you switched point of view later in book. I would better describe the angle thing. Work on paragraphs, punctuation, and grammar.
I loved how their relationship isn't going really fast, but slowly like how it would be in real life.
I really enjoy it and am looking forward to an update.