pinkxraliz

Dear Reader
“When does a person truly die? When their heart stops beating, or when the last person who remembers them finally forgets?” What if death isn't as final as we believe? Some questions can change an entire life. Beginning in the mysterious world of neuroscience, memory, and consciousness, this journey explores one of humanity's oldest questions: How powerless are we really in the face of time? Where science meets emotion and reason meets conscience, every answer leads to new questions. But A Drop of Time is only the beginning... The questions raised in the first book deepen in the second, while the third explores memory, identity, and the traces we leave behind. Together, the three books reveal different layers of one greater story. Blending science fiction and drama, the A Drop of Time trilogy explores love, consciousness, and what it truly means to be human. What is the difference between remembering the past and living it again? Is human intelligence deeper than artificial intelligence can ever reach?
On this occasion, I sincerely hope that you will continue this journey with me, share your thoughts along the way, and, should my story find a place in your heart, never hesitate to share it with others.

Hey guys I know you have missed me so much,me too but am very busy this days but I promise to write soon

Hi! I’m looking for honest and constructive feedback on my story, Perspective.
This is a personal writing project that I’ve been working on and improving over time. I’d really appreciate it if you could read it and tell me honestly what you think—not just about what works, but also about what doesn’t.
I’d especially like feedback on the story, characters, pacing, suspense, atmosphere, dialogue, emotional moments, and overall flow. If something feels confusing, rushed, predictable, unrealistic, or unnecessary, please tell me. Don’t worry about being too critical—I’d rather know what needs improvement.
You don't have to focus only on grammar. I mainly want to know how the story feels to you as a reader and whether it keeps you interested.
This is still a work in progress, so your feedback may help me decide what needs to be changed, expanded, or rewritten.

Here is my story. Thank you for taking time to read it❤️
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/1865695?utm_source=shared_ios

Hey pink, I hope you are doing well, I liked the concept of your story and will continue reading, take care

Hey! Thank you so much for adding my book - Invisible Patterns - to your reading list! I hope you enjoy the story. I'd love to hear your thoughts while you read. 📚💻❤️

I am so sorry I couldn't review your story today, I was a bit busy. So sorry I will do it tomorrow.

I like you anyway. I posted something on my wall; go check it out

I WANT TO CHAT ON SOMETHING: OK, SO A YEAR AGO,WE HAD A CONFERENCE IN MY CHURCH, SO I MET THIS GUY, WHO IS A YEAR OLDER THAN ME, HE MADE MY STAY A HAPPY PLACE AND WE EXCHANGED NUMBER, AFTER TALKING TO HIM FOR SOME DAYS FOUND OUT HIS ASTHMATIC, I FELT BAD AND ASKED HIM TO ATTEND OUR CHURCH, HE FELT SO HAPPY, HE ASKED WHY AM SO KIND TO HIM, I SAID ITS IN MY BLOOD, SO HE ATTENDED, WHEN WE MADE CALLS AND HE HAD TRIGGERS, I CRIED, HE ALWAYS ASKED ME TO STOP PLEASE THAT MY TEARS HURT HIM, BUT I COULDNT BEAR IT, HE WAS A GOOD PIANO PLAYER SO I USED MY POSITION IN THE CHURCH AND FOUND HIM A SPOT, EVERYDAAY HE ALWAYS WROTE LOVE QUOTES TO ME, BUT I IGNORED THEM, HE TOLD ME THAT AM THE ONLY TRUE FRIEND THAT EVER STAYED, BUT ONE THING I FOUND OUT IS THAT ONE OF MY FRIEND IS HIS GOD DUGHTER BUT I NEVER TOOK IT TO HEART, HE MADE ME FEEL SO IMPORTANT THAT HIS SIS TEASED US AS A COUPLE BUT I IGNORED THEM, WHEN HE FELT COMFORTABLE IN OUR CHURCH, ALL MY FRIENDS BECAME HIS FRIENDS, I ALWAYS PROTECTED HIM, BUT JUST A SMALL MISUNDERSTANDING MADE HIM TREAT ME LIKE TRASH, TURNING MY FRIENDS AGAINST ME, ONLY A FEW STAYED, MY FRIEND(HIS SCHOOL DAUGHTER) STARTED COMING CLOSE TO HIM, HE TAGGED ME HIS ENEMIES FOR A WHOLE YEAR SHEWING OFF MY NEW FRIENDS, NOW IVE MOVED ON BUT WITH A TAG NEVER TO BE FRIENDS WITH GUYS AGAIN, I WAS COLD TO THEM, BUT NOW HE ASK FOR US TO BE FRIENDS AGAIN, IS IT ADVISABLE, KNOWING THAT ILL ALWAYS FORGIVE HIM?

Thankyou so much for checking out my novel, it means so much to me as it is my passion project. And I am sure you will enjoy the novel more as the things get unravel in the future, I will read your novel tomorrow as it's night here, won't let you keep waiting. Thanks again.