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More Please!

What a fun thrill of a set up. As I was reading I began thinking of The Stand and but only as a passing thought. This is quite an original story that grabs you from the get. The mystery surrounding it keeps you pulled in wondering how it will turn out while giddily reading along. I have ferverously clicked the follow button and can't wait for more!

What a wonderful nibble

I love when flash fiction is so DAMN satusfying. Great job in describing the reality of what it must be like to be in this situation. The feelings and emotions rush in as fast as the story progresses. Look forward to reading more delicious morsels of horro from AW.

Beautiful

Thank you for this. Little did I know that such a familiar idea could be presented in such a new and refreshing way. The prose are wonderful and classic while still retaining modernity. I was taken immediately by the story and felt deeply the sense of attraction. I can't wait to read more.

WOW!

Kafka, Poe, Winters and Lovecraft thank you. I thank you. This was an absolute joy to read and kept me enaged all the way to the end. All chores and errands went out the window and I was not going to peel my eyes away from the screen until I knew how it all played out. Save for a few moments of tense confusion this is one of the best stories I have read in my short time being involved with this awesome site. I acannot WAIT to read more of Ell Mack.

What Flash Fiction Should Be

What a creepy little morsel of a story! As quick as this story is it grabbed me immediately. The use of language is perfect and I second that motion from the previous reviwer. It is refreshing to read a piece not riddled with big words and long decriptives. I look forward to reading more!

Wonderful Madness

I love these types of stories. Insanity building and building. The pace at which this story is written keeps you gripped with urgency hastily anticipating how it will end. Can't wait to read more of JG's tales!

Engaging

This is what excites me about the realm of online horror stories. Sometimes you come across someone who does something a bit different and it pays off in spades. The writing style of this story is wonderful and engaging. The story is an old idea brought back to life with a refreshing look. If there were any puctuation or grammer issues while I was reading this I didn't notice. I was too wrapped up in it wanting to see how it neded.