Taylor Pittman

Denton

Sad girl. Love horror. Gang gang.

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Creepy

I really liked the attention to detail with the sick patient. I was just as grossed out and freaked as the kid. While, I thought the build up to the actual horror was good I think with some editing and tweaking you could create a really unsettling scene and I also thought the ending was slightly anti climatic, I wanted the kid to get infected or like show more how it affected him later on in life. More on his paranoia and OCD tendencies. Overall though, truly creepy.

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