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interesting plot

The story was quite endearing and I really enjoyed the writing of the end passages, There were a few mistakes in the spelling and grammar but overall a nice story with a lovely ending

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sentiment

would have enjoyed them more if they had been a little longer the sentiment is very good. I think the writer has thought about what they write

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Brill !!

A lovely story that I thoroughly enjoyed reading one or two very little mistakes that I am sure if you read again you can soon alter I wish you the best for being published

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Brill

An intriguing tale that i truly enjoyed reading, hope you write more. There were one or two little mistakes but I am sure you can fix them easily. You can probably write another story with the same characters . I was so much better than some of the stories I have read on here I wish that the writing progress had people to monitor some of them . Well congratulations again on a fine story hope you get it published it deserves it. Best wishes Poltuck

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Please

take some time and review what you have written the story is great but the grammar Really needs a lot of work to make it read properly. there are places where the thoughts and tale just don't match and the sentences are written wrong you really need to revise. The story sounds great and I am sure you can do a good work and make it totally brilliant all the very best. Poltuck

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brilliant

enjoyed every minute of the read couldn't stop till I had read it all hope you get it published best to you Poltuck A P Jenkins

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please carry on with this story

we have to reach the rest and find out what is happening not fair to write such a small amount best for wishes hope to read more soon.

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Shame about the end

even a few lines to say she was alive or dead would have helped. Okay so possibly good we all make our own ending I can see your point.. The story was good but few grammar and spelling mistakes which may not have been your fault I know when writing we are sometimes working quickly and the words get mixed up. would hope you can re -edit and work out the mistakes and perhaps write an ending it would then I think be a big favorite with every reader good luck and I hope to read more of your work. Poltuck

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fast and furious

A great tale fast and a quick read loved how the plot came together only grumble first few passages were a little bit puzzling but soon got into story and enjoyed immensely

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best story up to now

Enjoyed it immensely one of the most riveting I have read couldn't stop reading it definitely different and intriguing Idea best of luck to you.

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