Icy heart, Beautiful Soul

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Icy

Not bad. I like the little metaphors mixed in but it could use more description. More "meat on the bones." Description of what is terrifying is great to instill fear and I just didn't feel it. It was nothing more than a story told around a fire. Not bad, but not gripping.

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