posymauve

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Wonderful

Wow what a wonderful story. Though the overall premise is not original, the story itself was unique, grabbing my attention from the first page to the final scene— which I must say I loved. Your characters were great, but I felt Nikoli could have been stronger as I sometimes felt he needed a bit more testosterone. Also more attention should be given to some of historical details; for example, cars and high school did not exist 200 years ago. That said it takes nothing away from the story.

For anyone who enjoys a good love story this is a great easy-read for a lazy Sunday afternoon, and I highly recommend it.

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