Pranjali Aditi

Hogwarts

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Cool!

It's really great for the first try and the plot seems good enough. Just keep writing and then you'll get the flow. No one is perfect. Keep it up!

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Nice!

It was a nice book with a good plot. Like others have said besides a few punctuation errors and some grammatical mistakes, you're good to go and I really enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work!

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Science fiction!

It's a science fiction which thrills me for it is my favorite genre. I really enjoyed living it and the writing style was beautiful. I can't help but wonder if this can be our near future.

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Wow!

The plot of this novel is great. It's interesting. The only problem I felt is that in the beginning, it felt like an essay more than a story. Otherwise, it's excellent. Keep it up!

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Interesting!

The plot is great and the writing style is good just a little bumps here and there with some grammatical errors. :)

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Wow!

There were a few missing words and the first chapter seems like a lot to take in at once but the plot seems really interesting.

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Interesting!

The plot of the book seems interesting but you're telling everything instead of showing which makes everything unappealing. Just rewrite it because the plot has a lot of potential.

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Oooooooooo!

I really enjoyed it and your writing style was great too. The plot is good and this book looks awesome!

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whoa!

I totally loved it. The aura is mysterious and I loved it. Your style is smooth and I can feel the image you're trying to paint. It was an amazing read!

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Cool!

A nice romance brewing up there. The writing style is good too. I'd recommend it to people who like romance.

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OH MY GOD!

I have read many detective books but oh God I didn't expect that. It was so good and amazing! surely your writing had bumps here and there but the plot was too good to notice that.

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Amazing!

I really like Len and Percy. It was great and I can't wait to read more. I really enjoyed it but the only thing I could ask for is maybe a little more about the surrounding.

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Cool

For the first book, you did a pretty good job. The plot seems good too. Well done and keep it up :)

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Interesting!

Although it's your first book you're better than many beginners. It's great just a little notes like don't use.... Are a ? Or use shorthands like ‘n’ instead of and. Lol it made me remind how I used ‘ohk’ when I first started. Nice effort and nice plot. The things I told you right now are obviously learned by experience. Keep it up!

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Amazing!

It was awesome and I loved every part of it. The aura of the book was thrilling, making me suspicious of everyone and everything. I really enjoyed it.

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Intriguing!

This story has an interesting plot which hooks you up in the beginning. The writing style was awesome and I enjoyed every moment of reading it.

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Sweet

It made me smile in a bittersweet way. The heartbreak is very beautifully described and the story is graceful. Nice work! Keep it up

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Wow!

The plot of this novel is great. It's interesting. The only problem I felt is that in the beginning, it felt like an essay more than a story. Otherwise, it's excellent. Keep it up!

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Intriguing!

The beauty of fantasy is well mixed with the mystery. The aura is great and I got high hopes. Nice work! Keep it up.

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Sweet!

It has a bitter sweet aura which tells you that there will be heartbreaks along the way and I personally believe in what Meyer thinks. Nice work! Keep it up.

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Interesting!

It's an interesting story which keeps you hooked up from the beginning. The aura is tensed and I can feel mystery brewing up in the air.

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Amazing!

It's just amazing. It is smooth and intriguing. It makes me want to keep reading. I really recommend it to everyone.

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Spooky!

Only first chapter Baby is updated till now and it has already hooked me in. The writing style is awesome and the flow is smooth. I could feel the tension and everything was totally amazing. I highly recommend it.

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Sweet!

I see a lot of potential in the writer and the plot is good too. The grammar is right and with practice, you'll grow to be a famous author Soon. Best of luck!

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Nice Effort!

Only one chapter is updated and so far the story looks good. The flow is missing but you will get it with practice. Seeing that this is your first book, it's really a great effort. Keep up! :)

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Awesome!

The female character is strong which I like the most. The writing style is also great and so far I have read, the plot seems good too.

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Beautiful

It's beautiful! The plot, the writing, the setting- everything is perfect. Your sense of growth is also amazing. Just keep going like this and you're going to be a famous author.

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Beautiful!!!

The poems are so beautiful and I can even connect to them. The cry of the poet reaches your soul and you can just feel it. It's an awesome piece of poetry.

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Intriguing!

It was a very smart way to introduce the protagonist through the diary form in the prologue. The writing style is good and the story plot is interesting. Anyone who likes historical fiction should go for it.

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Awesome!

The story is so good and the writing style is awesome. I can feel what the characters are feeling and I really enjoyed reading it.

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Hooked!

I'm totally hooked to it. I really loved it and I can't wait for more.

The writing style is awesome and it's so creative with how everything seems so natural. Truly, an amazing read

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Sweet

It was sweet and I could connect to the characters. The writing is good too, just in Chapter 2 suddenly it changed from a first person's POV to third person's pov. I really enjoyed it!

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Smooth

The aura of the narrative is smooth throughout the book and the character Brute is amusing. I like the description and the liveliness of the characters and yeah it's a fun read.
A nice read indeed. :)

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The title and the blurb hooks you in straightaway

The writing style is good which makes the story more interesting. The plot hooks you in. I really liked how beautifully the writer made us feel what the characters were feeling. A nice read for science lovers!

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One gang and a bronze battle

This book is really great with intense story line and the beautiful way of writing. The author has done a great work and I love the whole series! Anyone who loves action, mystery and thriller would love this. And... You can't forget the gangs and Xavier!

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