Alix Price

Somewhere in the clouds

Just here to do what I enjoy to do and what helps me breathe.

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Some issues but more Potential

The plot of this novel is good and I love the voice but at points there is a lot of telling and not enough showing. There could be more characterization of Raven and her family through dialogue and actions. For example, her brother and her being really close, the author could show that in a scene or her best friend always being there could also be shown a scene. I do enjoy the foreshadowing that is shown through prologue and first chapter. Keep writing, it's good.

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