Rejeitada pelo meu Alpha, Reivindicada pelo Alpha King

carolin

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Very interesting story

"As most of the other reviews state lots of repeat chapters. I assume they are different POV but it is not stated perhaps it can be corrected through editing. The plot is good. However there feel is as if lots of missing chapters. We go from rejecting to war. There is no connection of our protagonist and her bloodline just that it is. No plot to our alpha king and the Queen relationship it just formed no explanation. Most of the story builds this way with most of the story line missing. Reads as plot points no connection between. I read everything enjoying the plot. It is exciting to read the end of twisted evil and peace returned. Well worth the read. "

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JLW

80 capítulos lidos

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

"Wow to go from be rejected to being the silver queen... this story non stop fighting/ war... "

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marionmall

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Great story

"I enjoyed book. Kept my interest from start to finish."

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Enigmatica

"Me gusta como desarrolla las batallas. Pero fue muy pronto desde el momento que se descubre la loba de plata. Si lo recomendaria a los que le gusta este tipo de historia"

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D.L. JAE

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Promising Concept with Room for More Emotional Depth

"This story has a really interesting premise and a lot of potential. The overall idea behind the plot is intriguing and I could see where the author was going with it. It has a lot of chapters but I DNF. The reason is not because it was a bad story, it was because... The writing style felt a bit distant for me as a reader. The narration often came across very technical or straightforward, which made it harder to fully connect with the characters and their emotions. At the start of the story, I found myself wishing for more distinct personalities and deeper emotional moments. She was rejected and she felt nothing it seems and neither did I. When a story allows readers to really feel what the characters are experiencing, it can make the world come alive even more--my opinion. That said, the concept is strong and with a bit more emotional depth and character development to reel us (readers) in, this can be a very engaging story."

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lehmanbernd

65 capítulos lidos

Xyz

"Zuviel Wiederholungen gerade an jedem Ende der Kapitel"

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Intéressant

"Le livre est intéressant mais le problème c'est qu'il y a des chapitres qui se répètent et du coup on perd un peu l'intérêt du livre"

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Rejected by my alpha, claimed by the alpha king

"It started out great! I was so excited to read more. I’m not sure how the main character went from getting to the castle , to now fighting for the vale! Then it started repeating itself... Each monster that came out just did the same exact thing as the last. Over and over! The only thing I enjoyed for the last 50 chapters was the comic relief of the king’s sister! I finished the book hoping that it would get better, it got worse! I don’t recommend this book to anyone! "

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Kat

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Needs a strong editor

"The plot, the idea of the plot is strong. But how does a nobody, just found her wolf, just found out she's a Queen that no one really believed existed, already know how to control everything? How is she winning every battle? No doubt. No exhaustion. Not even a moment of practice or quick review of ancient text that gives her a hint...? "

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Several missing chapters as well as repeated ones

"I will confirm what others have also stated. This book started out great, but there are several large gaps in the story that don’t make sense without context. Along with missing chapters, there are many others that repeat themselves making it difficult to continue reading. I suggest the author go through and correct these errors."

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