Qual é sua opinião?
Suspense retado!
"Adorando a leitura. Cada hora tem uma novidade. Vamos ao próximo livro!"
Love the book. Hate the grammar.
"I love the story and the main protagonists. However you really need to proof read. The times I have had to re-read a sentence, sometimes even a paragraph is so frustrating. The speech between characters needs to made clearer as to who is speaking at the time. And also you’re writing mainly in third person but sometimes in first person, you can’t chop and change between the two it doesn’t make sense in the story."
The ultimate love story
"Love the raw emotions, the feelings, suspense, everything!"
A Strong Story That Deserves Stronger Editing”
"I enjoyed the storyline, and it was probably the main reason I continued reading to the end. The author clearly has a vivid imagination and some excellent ideas. However, in my opinion, the plot is undermined by inconsistent grammar and confusing punctuation. If the intended audience is younger teenagers, then the informal style may be understandable. However, if the author hopes to appeal to a wider audience, the writing would benefit from a more polished and sophisticated approach. Punctuation plays a vital role in storytelling. It guides the reader through conversations, thoughts, and actions, helping them understand exactly what is happening. When punctuation is unclear, it can become difficult to tell who is speaking, who is thinking, or whether dialogue is simply being presented as text messages. This creates confusion and makes it harder for readers to become fully immersed in the story. The author has creativity and imagination in abundance, and there is genuine potential here. With more attention to grammar, punctuation, and overall presentation, those strengths could shine through much more effectively and elevate the story into something truly memorable."
