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i love cats more than people

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Not my cup of tea but quite interesting.

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I would have to say that this isn't really in my line of interest but the dynamics between Kat and Lance was quite interesting and I would like to find out why he kept acting strange in person and more emotional in text. My suggestion would have to be in terms of the format of the story. It would be much easier to read if the dialogues are not put in just one paragraph especially if they are of different character voices. Nonetheless, I wish you good luck in future stories. :)

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Magical and surreal imagery!

I like the way the scenery was described. It felt real and very colorful. I also like the mystery surrounding Marissa. However, I feel that the plot was a bit fast. I would love to read Marissa's and Edwin's adventures together before they become really close (as in the story). If you're planning to make a longer story out of this, I think this first chapter is a good base but there needs to be more events before they get that close to each other. Kudos and good luck to your future work! :)

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