P.J. Van Cleave

Small town girl who loves reading, writing, sharing creativity and encouraging others to do the same.

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I loved the story and the authors writing style. Each chapter ends well leaving the reader turning the page. There are a few things that could improve the flow of the story such as punctuation, sentence structure, show vs telling and repeated words. Certainly one to keep your eye on. I look forward to reading the finished product. Keep up the good work!

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pvancleave

I can already see a movie being made! Loved it! Your writing is wonderful, your story and imagination is great! Very talented! All I can say is refreshing and excellent! A must read!

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Very nice

A very nice story about love, family and doing what's right. The characters were great-I especially enjoyed the dragons-and I loved the scenery, especially the caves. Easy to follow, a must read.

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pvancleave

I loved this story! Cute, funny, mysterious and never a dull moment. Very well written.

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