q_uinn23

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Reader and beginner writer 😁

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Love...!

Loving this so far!!! Avery is such a strong character, and oh my word, is she funny. You are extremely descriptive with your writing and it makes the reading that much more enjoyable. The character growth is quite amazing through each chapter, and they are all involved. I have a feeling there isn't going to be just one plot twist in this tale🤔😏.

Honestly so glad I started reading this book, and I cannot wait to read more. I hope to see it completed and published (Obviously no pressure here 😁😳) x

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Drama, drama, drama!

Can't wait for more!

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16?? Too young...

Promise of rape and them bam! He is the sweetest thing and protecting her by claiming her and confining her to a life that he didn't really ask if she wanted... She is just a child... Way too young... Taken advantage of due to her vulnerability and naivety. Poor thing. Controlling, manipulative and possessive. Great love story! 🙄

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Stunning.

The characters are so believable and likeable, although I have a few I wanted to poke with a stick. Lol! Well written story, couldn't put it down. Onto book two now! Can't wait! Thank you for the awesome read!

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Based on one and half chapters.

There is a lot of potential here but there is so much going on.

1) Who is telling the story? Who's POV is it?
2) You (the reader) are immediately thrown into a scene where you have to figure out what is going on but you have incredible descriptive details of what is around this person.
3) Dialogue is such a difficult thing, I battle with it too.

Like I said your book has so much potential and you're amazing! You just need to tweak it here and there. Or just ignore what I've said cause it's literally just my opinion.

Rock on x

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Exciting read!

I loved all the characters and their own personal growth within the book. There isn't just one important character all the time which keeps it interesting. Cannot wait for the second book!

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Excellent plot.

Really enthralling from the beginning. The storyline captures you from the beginning. The characters are quite enjoyable as well as the interactions between them. The climaxes were timed quite perfectly with great character development. Can't wait for more!

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That ending...

Quite a nice happy ending to a rather up and down emotional book.

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I can't wait to see Heat in bookstores worldwide!

This book is an amazing read, I read this on both Wattpad and Inkitt. Truly, a rush of emotions. The characters are inspiring to say the least and each person has their own story. It is so relatable in so many aspects and the people that are in the book are so life like, that when reading, it is as if you are reading someone's life and experiences that really had occurred. It really is magical for me. One of best books that I have read, and will read again.

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