Quan

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Fans of Romance would love this

If you're a fan of teenage romance novels like Kissing Booth & To All Girls I Loved Before, you will love this story. There are some excellent characters such as normal-girl and ass-hole boy. The world-building is excellent and well researched. I loved the family-like values. I cannot wait to read more about these characters and this world. Now, yes, there are a few grammar errors but if you can look beyond, you're going to have a good time.

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Excellent First Story

I have to admit that I'm not very keen on the horror aspect of stories as I'm a bit of a chicken. I was overall surprised by the story direction. It has an excellent built, cast of characters, and mystery. There are a few grammar mistakes and bad word choices but nothing a good reread wouldn't solve. Unless the story has massive potential and I cannot wait to read what happened next. Excellent work!

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Excellent Written and Plot

This is an excellent beginning of a novel. There is a lot of intriguing characters especially the main character. It is easy to get inside of his head and get to know what he's thinking and feeling. However, the dialogue could use some work as it is hard to know who's talking at times. Nonetheless, it's a good start, and cannot wait to read the rest of it.

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