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Exciting

This was a really engaging read, and all of the characters reminded me of real people. Keep doing what you're doing, you could really go places!

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Nice story

I think this is a really interesting take on your roots. I'd say just proofread your spelling, but it's a nice read despite that.

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good start

I think this could branch into I really interesting novel/short story, but I'm a bit confused about the plot. If this is just fantasy then I guess it's fine, but full body recoveries aren't possible (Like a brain transplant?). The descriptions are really vivid, but always remember to pace yourself. Overall, this has a lot of potential!

I'd appreciate some advice on my story too, if you wouldn't mind.
One last thing, why is this under scifi? Isn't that like aliens...

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Vivid

I have to say that from what I read so far, this is a beautiful story. Each scene has an intense depth to it through the long painted descriptions. I should definitely recommend this to a friend!

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Bloom

I have not fully finished your book, but from what I have read this is what I gather. The plot is honestly great, I was hooked from the first chapter. I think It's really important to have books like this, which though is a fantasy book, documents the effects of abuse in and out of home. When it comes to punctuation it was a bit wonky, but I've been there. It didn't take away from the story itself. Great Job!

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