Rachel Wollaston

3x indie published author and Creative Writing undergraduate. Always hungry for more fantasy! Actually, just always hungry in general.

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A Beautifully Touching Story

This story definitely deserves all its positive reviews--I devoured the whole thing in one sitting! I especially love the character interactions and the raw emotion, and often humour, that they invoke. One thing I will say is that this is a story which may benefit from being in a longer format. There is a lot of story hidden away in here which could be explored further and the rest of it could perhaps do with some pacing; it is a rather fast-moving story and some of the romance can feel a little stilted at times (though that might just be me being a grumpy old cynic!). Bottom line: great story, definitely recommend.

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