Rachel Wollaston

3x indie published author and Creative Writing undergraduate. Always hungry for more fantasy! Actually, just always hungry in general.

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Lovely Story

This has the makings of a really intriguing story. I especially like the rich world-building and great characters.
Some of the prose can probably be simplified, in the sense that some sentences read as clunky, but the overall writing style and grammar is very strong!

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A Beautifully Touching Story

This story definitely deserves all its positive reviews--I devoured the whole thing in one sitting! I especially love the character interactions and the raw emotion, and often humour, that they invoke. One thing I will say is that this is a story which may benefit from being in a longer format. There is a lot of story hidden away in here which could be explored further and the rest of it could perhaps do with some pacing; it is a rather fast-moving story and some of the romance can feel a little stilted at times (though that might just be me being a grumpy old cynic!). Bottom line: great story, definitely recommend.

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