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love it

that kidnapping scene with a driver waiting for the right moment to take the family, it set the story up and I was hooked just had to find out what happen to the family, the crime scene where the family was found with other bodies, the Office Homles reaction, love that scenes. but there is one that I would have like more detail on, Morgan and Emily's​ last scene need more time for him to come to terms with the fact in that moment she did not trust him that needed more details and maybe even a scene of them sign up for trust active or something like that.
thank you for the ​great story.... I really enjoyed it .

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