This is a great story! I love how well you go into detail and emotions of Capri, and Mel. You have amazing dialogue and overall it's just a thrill to read!
I en joy get in to the charaters emotions epsicaly Capri has she work through the case and the interaction between Mel and Capri was great,
But this flashback would have had more detailing I could not feel the emotions in them.
Other than that, this story is fantastic and I really enjoy it.
that kidnapping scene with a driver waiting for the right moment to take the family, it set the story up and I was hooked just had to find out what happen to the family, the crime scene where the family was found with other bodies, the Office Homles reaction, love that scenes. but there is one that I would have like more detail on, Morgan and Emily's last scene need more time for him to come to terms with the fact in that moment she did not trust him that needed more details and maybe even a scene of them sign up for trust active or something like that.
thank you for the great story.... I really enjoyed it .
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