Raven Snow

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Memory of Love

I have only read two chapters so for so that's not much to go off but I feel a strong voice within the main character. She is someone that so far is relatable that has been put in an unusual circumstance. The author does a good job of using the first person to bring the character to life. I think it might be useful to read something out loud to yourself because some sentence structures are off along the way. I look forward to reading more!

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Interesting Romance

I have only read the first two chapters but it is clear that some real passion is about to blossom. From the prologue, we get a glimpse of regret and deep desire. I like how this story is written in a different POV way. I haven't read enough to get a real idea about the plot but it does seem to be interesting. I think you need to work on how to better make your words flow more naturally, and the best way to do that is to keep writing and also read your work to yourself out loud. Most dialogues between characters seem real but the descriptions looses me at time.

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