Ray O'reilly

Dublin, Ireland

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great Plot

Hi Susan

Another great piece of flash fiction love the humour running through this one. The plot is brilliant and could really be expanded on. Such a character you have created.

grammar better in this one. Well done

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fab read

hi Susan

A great creepy piece of flash fiction - delectable - would love it be developed into a much longer piece well done on a different fresh take of the theme
aside note - few grammar issues

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