Rebecca Eisenhuth

Florence

Happily unmarried with lotsa nieces and nephews I adore! Have been writing for years and love it!

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Intriguing!

This is a wonderful beginning. There is obviously some wonderful drama going on here and I look forward to hearing from all of the ladies eventually. The emotion - angst, guilt and need to be what they are not - is fascinating. Yes, a few edits are needed, here and there, but I am looking forward to reading more.

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Thoughtful

Well done. I like your style. Hope to read more. *Thumbs up*

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Good Start

I'm impressed. It immediately got my attention. There are a few grammatical issues, a missing period - etc. However, the style is great and the lead up to the next chapter has me wanting more.

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