America Beauty American Psycho

I'm a 22-year-old jack of all trades who can't tell a joke to save my life.

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Good job

I absolutely love the premise of this story and the plot points are good. There are some confusing parts where there are time jumps with no break in the narration. But, overall it is a good story!

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Needs Work

It's an interesting premise, but it is riddled with grammatical errors and spelling mistakes. The plot doesn't seem to follow any set timeline and that makes it extremely hard to follow. The characters are a bit flat and need some fleshing out, they need some more distinction as it is hard to keep track of who is who when they all sound the same.

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AMAZING!!

Really great story, I finished it in 2 days!! Can't wait to read the sequels!

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Loved it

This is an awesome exploration of the English language! I love the imagery and the story was very sweet. I was a little confused as to what had happened, but I read the synopsis. Overrall super good!

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Good story

It's pretty good overall. An interesting plot with some twists and turn, but there a lot of technical issues.

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