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Interesting

I enjoyed this chapter, especially your writing style. The fight scene was a lil slow, but it's something that can be shrugged off because the story was interesting.
It's cool how you've changed things to be more realistic, what with Natsu using tech for his fireballs and stuff. One question; how's it tech, but there's still Sorcerer Weekly? Does magic still exist and Natsu doesn't have it? Or does the mag still have the same name for no reason.

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