Renee Laraway

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The Moon's Pawn

There is such great world building in this story so far with so many complex characters. I can already tell the main character is a force and I love her! I'm excited to learn more about her. The writing style helps to tell the story wonderfully. My only thing would be to just clean up the grammar a little. Otherwise an amazing ongoing story! ❤

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Number Neighbor!

There are only 2 chapters so far but the idea for the story is a good one! It will be interesting to see how things pan out. Will her number neighbor turn in an enemy, a friend or something more? I feel like this story could go in either direction and I'm interested to find out. My only comment is to clean up the grammatical errors. Otherwise great start! Awesome job so far! 💖

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Butterfly Girls!

There's not much of the book so far, but what there is I really enjoy! I think the author does well in portraying mental illness. The characters all have their own unique personalities who are all compatible with one another. The story flows well and there's enough mystery to keep me wanting to read more! Great writing!

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Icons!

This isn't usually the type of book I would pick up to read. But the flow and plot of the story is amazing. I like how it changed between characters in the chapters. I also liked how all the characters were connected. The ending I thought was very sweet. I'm also always very appreciative of good grammar as I find it distracting to read if there are a lot of grammatical errors. Overall really awesome story! Props to the author!

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Love it!

I love this story! I was a huge fan of the vampire diaries and I feel like this puts a whole new spin on the genre. The story flows nicely and the pace of the story is good as well. I don't feel like things are moving too slowly or that anything is lagging. The characters are loving and have great chemistry with each other. You do amazing with descriptions of scenery as well which really helps pull you in and make the story more three dimensional. I also seriously appreciate the good grammar. I find it very distracting and difficult to read when there are a lot of grammatical errors, so I was glad to find it was very minimal through out your story. I am excited to see where the story will lead them now that they have all just got started on a new journey! Keep up the amazing writing/story telling. <3

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