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Brillant Storytelling!!

I absolutely loved this book because:
- The build-up is easy and steady allowing the reader to understand the protagonist and fall in love with her before the plot comes into play, amazing job!
- Perfect descriptions on showcasing her emotions, her thoughts and her day-to-day life, It was spot on, very well executed.
- As a person who does not know Greek history, I absolutely loved the way you spoke about this historical fiction that allowed me to be introduced and understand on a more detailed level of the fates, the gods, and so on.

One overall comment:
- It would help to include some detailing of the classroom that she sits in, or the way she behaves when she is in a conversation that she does not want to be in. It allows us to be more engrossed in her emotional state and the essence of the surroundings, bringing us into the world of Morgana.
ally want your characters to swear.

A Good Read!

I loved:
- The build-up is easy and steady allowing the reader to understand the protagonist and the towns context!t
- An interesting approach to narrative writing! Good job!

Overall, definitely something I had fun reading!

Incredible Plot and Skills!

I absolutely loved this book:
- The build-up has so much suspense and mystery. With every word, I'm hanging at the edge of my chair.
- Great descriptive writing and narrative scheme, good execution!

As a fan of adventurous and mysterious genres, I loved the characters and the plot wholeheartedly. One of my favourites!

Interesting!

i definitely loved the starting of this chapter! its completely relatable and i fell in love with the protagonist. i do feel like if you use more paragraphing thought that your story would flow easier! but you do you of course❤️