
clucasjan10
a year ago
Can you tell me if you started or when book 2 of royal hunter will be on
clucasjan10
2 years ago
Do you know or have you started book two? Just wondering cause I haven't seen it heard anything. I enjoyed the first book can't wait for second 😁
LizzieWildblood
2 years ago
Hey Rita, I've sent you some thoughts on Royal Hunter xx
LizzieWildblood
2 years ago
Hey Rita, just to say I have finished Royal Hunter and wow what a journey it was!! I’ll get a message together later with all my thoughts…. But overall fantastic job!!!! Can I message you privately though? Not sure if there’s something in your settings it won’t let me from your profile page???
RitaC
2 years ago
Hi everyone!
RH Poll (below): do you think the chapters are too long? Inkitt recommends chapters around 2400 words while some of mine are twice that! Any opinion?
Update: I've been gradually editing each chapter with revised versions that focus on spelling, emotional development, and improving the writing/voice. I intentionally haven’t been working in a linear order to avoid getting too caught up in the plot and focus solely on the writing itself. Some changes are significant, while others are quite minor. Fyi, I revised chapters 21 and 22 today!
RitaC
2 years ago
Are my chapters too long? Inkitt recs = 2400w, mine are sometimes 4500w
Yes, shorter would be better
No, the segmenting makes sense as it is
Did not think about it as I read
3 votes
RitaC
2 years ago
IA also generated a pastoral-ish book cover - This looks more like Cole, but the girls' clothes are all wrong.
LizzieWildblood
2 years ago
Hey I’m happy to beta read your story. Your plot pulled me in and made me add it to my list.
What type of feedback are you looking for? Spelling/Grammar …. Plot… characters??
RitaC
2 years ago
Royal Hunter friends: do you think RH vol.1 can become publishable?
With A LOT of editing and proofreading, yes
Cute but delulu
You're almost there!
Publishable online for free, sure, don't aim higher!
7 votes
RitaC
2 years ago
Hi everyone,
Thank you for subscribing! I am very new to this, bare with me :)
I am looking for feedback on Royal Hunter to help with the heavy editing I'm planning (in preparation for book 2).
I'd love feedback on story elements such as character development, pacing, and plot.
Anyone interested in helping shape the story, please let me know!