RitaC

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clucasjan10

a year ago

Can you tell me if you started or when book 2 of royal hunter will be on

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clucasjan10

2 years ago

Do you know or have you started book two? Just wondering cause I haven't seen it heard anything. I enjoyed the first book can't wait for second 😁

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LizzieWildblood

2 years ago

Hey Rita, I've sent you some thoughts on Royal Hunter xx

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LizzieWildblood

2 years ago

Hey Rita, just to say I have finished Royal Hunter and wow what a journey it was!! I’ll get a message together later with all my thoughts…. But overall fantastic job!!!! Can I message you privately though? Not sure if there’s something in your settings it won’t let me from your profile page???

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RitaC

2 years ago

Hi everyone!



RH Poll (below): do you think the chapters are too long? Inkitt recommends chapters around 2400 words while some of mine are twice that! Any opinion?



Update: I've been gradually editing each chapter with revised versions that focus on spelling, emotional development, and improving the writing/voice. I intentionally haven’t been working in a linear order to avoid getting too caught up in the plot and focus solely on the writing itself. Some changes are significant, while others are quite minor. Fyi, I revised chapters 21 and 22 today!

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RitaC

2 years ago

Are my chapters too long? Inkitt recs = 2400w, mine are sometimes 4500w

Yes, shorter would be better

No, the segmenting makes sense as it is

Did not think about it as I read

3 votes

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RitaC

2 years ago

IA also generated a pastoral-ish book cover - This looks more like Cole, but the girls' clothes are all wrong.

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LizzieWildblood

2 years ago

Hey I’m happy to beta read your story. Your plot pulled me in and made me add it to my list.
What type of feedback are you looking for? Spelling/Grammar …. Plot… characters??

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RitaC

2 years ago

Royal Hunter friends: do you think RH vol.1 can become publishable?

With A LOT of editing and proofreading, yes

Cute but delulu

You're almost there!

Publishable online for free, sure, don't aim higher!

7 votes

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RitaC

2 years ago

Hi everyone,
Thank you for subscribing! I am very new to this, bare with me :)

I am looking for feedback on Royal Hunter to help with the heavy editing I'm planning (in preparation for book 2).

I'd love feedback on story elements such as character development, pacing, and plot.

Anyone interested in helping shape the story, please let me know!

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