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Well-written

This sounds like a fun plot for a graphic story. It is regrettable that the writer couldn't upload his drawings, because they would surely have positively complemented his writing. What I like most about this piece, is that its scarce words leaves room for readers to imagine their own idea of alternative worlds. I also liked his fluid, clean and concise style. Overall, it was a very enjoyable read and I'd love to see more from the writer.

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Made me smile

This story is one of my favorite on Inkitt. I truly enjoyed the creative plot, the writer's ability to create a touching piece of work. A few things could be improved, but then again raw works are often more powerful than workshopped pieces. I thought it was well-written overall and I'd like to read more about this writer.

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Nice story

I appreciated the originality of this story. However, the author could improve it by avoiding the use of too many adjectives and improving the flow of words. Overall, the writing was a bit dull and not fluid enough to grab me from the start.

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