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Great change of direction
Really enjoyed Kyle firstly becoming the sex toy of two perverted old men (with more to come by the sound of it) and then reversing that completely in the second scene. Interesting development of Kyle‘s personality I’m really hot. Then we had the tease at the end with Enzo. Very easy to visualise the same in the hallway. Can’t wait to see where this goes, perhaps the flashback to see how Enzo first got into this situation with Dr. Clarence.
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