Brianna

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A Unique Read

I have never managed to read thirty-something chapters so quickly. I was perplexed at first by the shorter than average chapters in the beginning--but as I dived in, I began to understand why.

At first, I thought the author was leaving something to be desired. I wanted to know more, more about each character and their intentions. I wanted to know what they looked like, what they enjoyed doing, and what their pesky little habits were.

As I read on, though, I found that this was indeed intentional. This author draws the reader in, leaves them dangling for the scraps, and then locks them up and forces them to go through every up and down this story has to offer. This is a very, very, very, very VERY good thing. I haven't really found a story that I could binge like this... in little under two hours. Fantastic read, fantastic style.

I suggest sticking it through to the very end... things will hit you that you did not expect!

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The Next Best Thing

This author has an artistic and phenomenal way with words. I am the opposite of a sci-fi fanatic, but this author draws the reader in with their word choices and style but keeps them hooked with the happenings within the story.

He takes what is known of Scifi, and all the mystery it entails and twists it into its own thing. Whether you are an avid fan of science fiction or not, I strongly, strongly STRONGLY recommend you read this story.

Also, plot twist. There aren't any black holes. (inside joke with the author).

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A Sensuous Story...

I've never been the type to seek out erotic books, but after getting a taste of this one, I most definitely want to continue. The author manages to blend a complicated dynamic between two protagonists who are swaying on the thin line between love and hatred. Follow this intense and frustratingly amazing story about two souls who just can't seem to stop fighting each other.

I promise, you wouldn't dare regret it. :)

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A Story With So Much Potential!

This plot is so alluring and it draws the reader in so quickly within two short chapters. I applaud the author for acheiving this.

It is a work in progress, scattered with very minor technical issues (such as typos and tense switches), which is why I was not able to give the technical skills a 5. This is still extremely well developed, though, which is why it definetly earned a 4, and would be increased to a 5 once it's edited!

The plot was intriguing, and I want to see it further developed with more inward reflection. This author is a pro with describing the characters emotions and thoughts--use this to your advantage, author! Help us dive into the world of this tragic tale and bring us on the roller coaster that is to come :)

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