rodikenee

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Very Creative and Interesting

The author does an excellent job creating their own world, including their own language. I'm very impressed with the imagination used, it reminds me of George R R Martin, J K Rowling and J R Tolkien creating their own complete worlds. The plot is very interesting and kept me engaged and interested the entire time!

The prologue was a little long and sometimes hard to follow switching between characters so often in the middle. The grammar needs a little bit of fine tuning.

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Once Bitten

This is certainly an interesting piece that made me want to keep reading to find out what happened. It almost seems like it could be part of the Star Wars Cannon, or something like that. I did not see the end coming at all, very nice twist! I don't think I have ever read anything similar to this at all, it is a completely new and fresh idea!

The technical aspects of the writing, such as grammar, were really good. I didn't care for some of the phrasing, or style of writing, though. Some of the phrases or comparisons made I didn't understand at all, I think they were used before my time. There were also a few phrases that were used repeatedly throughout, sometimes in two or three sentences in a row.

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