rythefly

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Good Introduction

Good introduction to a character and a environment, with a potentially traumatic event as a plot device. A short story makes it difficult to elaborate or develop certain aspects of a story, though this story did the right thing and developed the relationship between daughter and father in the right proportion. Hopefully this story will be expanded, and more time will be spent on the relationship, as it is this stress which drives the main character to contemplate drastic measures to escape her environment.

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