Sabitha Kiritharan

Brilliant

It was a great read, which you have written through a lot of research. As an author you are educated on the topic and have created a wonderful story. I love how as a writer we experience everything. It was a very gripping story and you have captured the culture lovely. Your writing style is interesting and wonderful. You have constructed your story beautifully and produced an amazing story. Well done!

Wonderful Story

I love the character of Saravi Hussain, who in your story is my favourite character who feels like a well complete detailed character. Saravi was an unxpected character who did things that made the reader like her. Your story is full of plots and it intrigues the reader. I like the spy sense of humour. There were a few technical errors, but that's fine since your growing as a writer and I myself make many mistakes. Lovely read.Nice story.

Nice

Though I'm not a big fan of erotic stories. I have to say your story was well written. The characters were relatable and the plot was great. Overall the story was a very good read. I like your writing style.

Thanks for the feedback

I appreciate all the feedback both negative and positive. It's my first story so in my next story I will take all the feedback and improve. Thanks to everyone who read my story.

Great Story

Few typos but otherwise a brilliant story. I loved the characterisations and your story is a lovely read.Nice familiar plot but with its own twist. Great use of descriptions and like your humour. I think to improve you could make the plot a bit quicker since it was a bit slow. But I like your plot. I guarantee it's a great read.