Sadie Ohio

Roswell N,M

Who are you to judge my art? Who am I to say it is?

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Truly Outstanding Work

I love the use of vocabulary. I am such a nit pick when it comes to poetry and words rhyming. When used in the wrong way rhyming every sentence can create a sense of juvenile thought processes being present while working on a project. Words that are absolute rhymes such as "bad, lad, mad etc.' are not good usage of rhyming. The way Marvy used rhythm and speech in this tale is truly extraordinary and the exact opposite of what I just explained. They not only used absolute rhymes in the correct manner but they did partial rhymes. "orange, door hinge, courage' etc. that made it sound just amazing. I am looking forward for updates and can't wait to see what else Marvy can pull out of their sleeves.

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Okay

Didn't read the daughter ones because...not my thing but the stranger one was okay. It was good. One thing about writing things with genitalia in it is not to use "code words" such as "sex" it's just not how things go down man. At least not in my experience. Other then that tho it was a kick ass story. The plots were a little....odd but like I said good frigging story man..

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