salma

Hi! I’m looking for honest and constructive feedback on my story, Perspective.
This is a personal writing project that I’ve been working on and improving over time. I’d really appreciate it if you could read it and tell me honestly what you think—not just about what works, but also about what doesn’t.
I’d especially like feedback on the story, characters, pacing, suspense, atmosphere, dialogue, emotional moments, and overall flow. If something feels confusing, rushed, predictable, unrealistic, or unnecessary, please tell me. Don’t worry about being too critical—I’d rather know what needs improvement.
You don't have to focus only on grammar. I mainly want to know how the story feels to you as a reader and whether it keeps you interested.
This is still a work in progress, so your feedback may help me decide what needs to be changed, expanded, or rewritten.
Thank you for taking the time to read Perspective. I genuinely appreciate your honesty.

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Hi, Salma! 😊

Nice to finally meet you, and thank you so much for the follow! I really appreciate it. ❤️

I saw your book and would love to read it! I was wondering, would it be possible to make it available on both desktop and the app? It looks like your book is currently only available on the app.

I don't use the app since my phone is pretty slow, so I usually read through my laptop instead. 😅

I'd love to give your book a read if it's available on desktop! Anyway, see you around! 😊❤️

Hey salma! 💕✨

I’m a new writer here and I’ve recently started posting my story, *Sunset*. 🌅

It’s a coming-of-age story about growing up, family, friendships, trauma, finding yourself, and learning to keep going even when life gets heavy. It’s something I’m putting a lot of myself into, and I’d love for you to give it a chance if it sounds like your kind of story. 🥹

I’d also love to discover more stories from fellow writers here! If you have a story you’re currently working on, feel free to tell me about it—I’d genuinely love to check it out when I get the time. 💗

Let’s support each other on this writing journey! 🫶✨

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