SamanthaPaige

Samantha Paige M.

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Wowza

This is brilliant! I'm reading this in class, so I had to cover my laughter. I don't think it went very well...

I think you captured the characters' personalities fairly well in how they would react to Sirius's antics. I especially enjoyed Sirius's silliness :)This was a lovely quick read, and I hope to read more Harry Potter fanfictions from you verrrrry soon!

Great job!

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