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Had me hooked!

I think this is an amazing beginning to a story. It leaves the reader hooked and you have a good use of imagery! I like how I'm able to paint a picture of what's going on in the story while reading. There are some technical writing issues but with a bit of editing, you'll be just fine! Good luck on your writing process! I will continue to be reading along as you update.

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Great Plot

Wow! I just want to say I love the plot of the story. From the very beginning I was intrigued. I enjoy Ella's flashbacks, because as a reader it makes me want to know more about her life and what lead her up to that point. There are a few grammatical errors, but we all tend to get those it's just a matter of going back and fixing them :) Good luck with your writing process, and I will continue to read and support your work.

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Mr. Lu

I wrote most of my thoughts in the comments but this is a really interesting and unique plot and it leaves the reader wondering. I can’t wait to see where this story goes. I would just go back and try to edit some grammar and punctuation errors, but that’s okay! We all have errors sometimes. Good luck with your writing process!

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