Samsterix reader

Hi samsterix!
I’m seeking a beta reader for my completed reincarnation romantic thriller, What the Fire Remembers. It is approximately 70,000 words / 44 chapters, dual POV, with moderate heat and mild violence.

She remembers the fire. He remembers losing her. And someone in the shadows is determined to burn them both again.

Summary:Centuries ago, a queen died in flames, leaving behind a shattered kingdom and an eternal vow. Years later, Victoria Whitmore is a sleep-deprived pediatrician in Windermere who trusts science, not past lives—until a string of murders marked with the Phoenix Seal forces her back toward Alexander, the guarded man who recognized her from visions he never trusted. Neither of them trusts the past that binds them, but Alexander may be the only person who can keep her alive. If she trusts him, she may repeat the betrayal that killed her. If she doesn’t, the killer may finish what the fire started.

I’m not looking for line editing or proofreading. I need reader-level feedback on pacing, plot, and emotional impact—especially where the story drags or rushes, whether the mystery/thriller plot feels earned, and whether the romance and reincarnation thread land emotionally.I’m flexible about timing. I’ll send a short list of targeted questions if you are interested.

Thank you for your time

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Hey, I saw one of your comments and I’m wondering if it would be okay to send you one or two of my chapters of my book to you

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