Sam Thorne

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A fun one

Loved the teamwork between those little gangsters and the mini celebration after the kicking. And I always wondered what the rolling would feel like...

a couple of apostrophes and commas missing but in all-dialogue, the intonation carries its own weight anyway. Not a big deal.

I'd read another story from the same author's imagination!

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