San Aly

Hi You can call me san or aly. πŸ’ž read, write, dance, music🎼, imagine stories. love Talking to myself feel free to Recommend a story of yours for me to read. You can find me on wattpad - @san_aly

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A really memorable read

Ah...
Beautiful story... beautiful ending. So good.
With so many Important massages. Very moving.

Such a nice way of connecting Bible with today's people's life.

Very well written. Impressed. All was good.

Please write more...Want to read more from you.

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The time I've given in this book to read is not wasted

At first the story flow is slow... like really slow.
But then from the middle it picked speed.
The Ending is really fast compared to the Beginning.

But all over the plot is pretty good.
The way you have decided to put scenes one after another is pretty good too. It's really appreciated.

So, the story, your talent is really good.
But this is also the fact that you have some major improvements to do.
All the best for you next projects... would love to see what comes out from your creative brain.

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Amazing

What can I say it's an amazing story.
Well put together, well thought, good plot, well written, organized... just fav...
I just love this...
Keep doing. I would love to read more stories from you...
It's just wow..

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Its really funny & emotional & lovely


I really like the story. It such a sweet love story.

I like the characters. The friendship between the characters is so good. Another thing that I like about this story is there is no unwanted drama.

You're good. I'd like to read more of your stories.

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Interesting mirror

I read this book more than some months ago. And it was the time when I wasn't used to writing reviews. And I have been writing reviews for more than 7-8 months.

And now suddenly today I remember about this book and remember what I felt reading it. I remember I laughed at those scenes that were so funny, and was so interesting to read this book, couldn't stop until I finished. And also remember I didn't review this book.

If a book leaves an impression on you and makes you feel emotions then that book certainly deserves some feedback and appreciation.

I liked this book.

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Really good.
Different nice plot. Have a lesson... important one.

Really like your writing skills.

People might've evil but they ought to have good too.

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I like the story. The plot, twist, and your style of writing is nice.
You are good at writing.
So, don't stop writing.

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Nice...😌

The story is really good. A really sweet story. Your way of describing story, the charactersnis so good. I like it.
Carry on with writing. I like most of your works.

BTW if you can then pls edit the story thoroughly.

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Really

Really crazy story...
So many things happened but it definitely happened smoothly... not rushed which I like. The credit goes to you

For this story, I can say CRAZY STORY ALERT if that thing exists...

The story is really fun to read. Like no stopping till you finished reading.

There are so many things I like about the story... I like the relationship between the good characters, the plot, the flow, the way of describing things that make the scenes the emotions come out clear...

So keep writing ... you are good at this...

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Good and not so common

Really nice story, with a good flow from the start.
Like the concept, way of writing. Like everything about this story.

Nice, simple, not so complicated, and sweet romance.
If this is what your taste is?? If you like romance?? Then this story will be perfect for you.

You are a good writer so keep writing

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Very nice...

A very food book... interesting storyline, very good character building, all over a it's really good... however a sad and interesting ending... feel like a sequel will happen so will wait for it... so bring it soon...
And you are really good writer, have potential and talent so keep doing... definitely like to read more from you

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Deserve to be published...

Since the first book I really didn't mind the age of the lead characters...instead I feel like it suits the story.

I really like how the end of the whole mystery unfolds. The second chance they get... and the sweet romance between Emily and James is really different then what kind of romance we read now ... if anything its quiet refreshing.

The whole story do needs some editing but its worthy of being published readers like me will love it.

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Uhmmmm

I really like the twist of who turns out to be the darkness...
This book is again a very nice one. I've finish reading the series... but going to say things about the last book in its review, because this series deserves every appreciation it gets...

Other then all of that I thing you should get some time out and edit the whole series cause i saw some mistakes... and by editing it'll only make the books more good.

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Unpredictable twists

Again a really good one... so many thing happened but it didn't feel like rushed which show how good you write.
Some of the twist is really good I really like...
In this review I'm going to say the series is really really good...

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already started reading book 3

Really good... this is one of few series that still have my interest in reading next book after reading book 2

I do notice some mistakes here and there so I think if you have time pls consider editing.

For me a book or a series is good only when it still can have my interest in reading further... so I can say this book really good.

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♑♑♑●●♑♑♑

OMG the book the story is just awesome.
I'm going to continue reading the series without a day gap... I won't survive until I finish... such a interesting book... since the 1st chapter it keeps a tight hold on me as a reader... and as a writer it makes me admire your imagination skills...

So happy that I'm finally reading this book after keeping it in my reading list for 6 months or so...

Ok bey... can't write any more in this review for you, have to get back to reading the 2nd book can't wait to find what what happened next.

Bey. Bey. Have a good day.
And YOU author, keep writing

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Good story

Really really like the story.
The idea, way of writing, twists all are good.
I really love the main characters and their relationship... with each other and with other characters both.
Did I say you are a really good writer.

Btw

pls edit the story...

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~β™‘~

Great story.
I love the way you write, very good concept.
Love the main character...
If you are going to do a sequel then I for sure will read it... No actually plz make a sequel...

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Yep... good

Really good.
The story... the book 1 is really interesting make me want to continue with the series... the plot is interesting, unique and simple at the same time...
I love the father son relationship it's admirable...
Good work...

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We all sometimes feel like this

This isn't a story, this is just a paragraph that has something to say.
To author,

Would like to read more from you... so pls keep writing more.

β€”san_aly

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Impressive... extremely

First thing first... the story, way of writing, the plot, the flow of the story is just amazing, awesome. It's interesting.
You absolutely got some talent.
If you are ever got to write a sequel then pls do it...
This story is surely in my favorite book's list.

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Loke the plot all over

Okey...
I love the plot all over.
And mainly I like the fact that they-the main characters were together even through the problems... that's something I really like.
It's a really good story...
You did good with this...

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Good story all total...

This story is good.
But in the middle you make a lot of scenes that kind of seems like Xavier has a backstory of his life too, but then the story goes even ended but we didn't get the story. Also, Some of the things felt left out.
Other then that...
The storyline is good. You do got some writing skills in humor.
Still can't say this is your best, it's good...
I enjoyed overall and do not regret reading it.
Keep doing cause you got what it takes... sometimes it's really funny.

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Love it

This is also one of those book I read in the beginning of my reading journey...🀣
But on the serious note this book is great.
I still remember how I felt reading it, I loved it.
If anyone out there looking for BILLIONAIRE ROMANCE, this BOOK is for you...
No!!! Actually this AUTHOR is for you.
Did I mention I really love this Author's work... every single one of these are great.

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This book I like my favorite forever.

This is the 1st story I ever read on online reading or writing platforms.
Not in this app, it was on dreame... I just downloaded it to test if this way of reading( means reading book online on phone or tab) suits me or not then the 1st book I found was this... thought let's start with this... and then I feel like this is what I need.
I really have read countless books in this three yrs, enough that I don't remember all of them. But I remember this one, not because it was the 1st, it was... is one of the best.
If you want to read all good or best books you need to read this first

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Wouldn't mind to recommend it to others

I like it... good story
Slow start, good length, interesting, nice progress.

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It's a bit new plot

I haven't read any thing like this kind.
I'm not saying there isn't any Other book out there like this.
But what I am saying is I haven't come across...
And I'm glad I did with this one.
Cause it's great story

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Expectations

I can say, it did stand on my expectations. Cause after the 1st book I really have some with the next book.
I'm not disappointed.
It's really just as good as the 1st one.

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πŸ‘like it

It is really good. I love it.... simple. Realistic. Fun. Musical. Good story for light, happy, energetic, joyful mood.

You did a pretty good job. Keep going.

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Fav❣❣

This book really has the capability to hold its readers, and not let them leave until they finish reading. And even after you finish the book, the characters, plot, scene, feel will not leave your mind. For at least some days...

It's THAT fav.

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Just love this.......
Guess if you want to know how this book is???
Then I'm going to say just one line for that...

I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS BOOK. anything else ...

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Pretty good

Overall it's really good, but the climax like stella's truth reveal, her understanding her responsibilities all that part seems like a bit rushed.
Except that the story is really simple, and simplicity is always beautiful.

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