Sarocapipoca

Narnia

Hi there! I am new to this platform but I have an account on Wattpad if you want to check it out @Sara04girbal. It would mean the world to me if you could check out my book and give me some feedback.

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Amazing!!

I absolutely loved it! In the beginning the plot was allotrope confusing but once I fornir everything made sense. It is so funny and I had a great time reading it! There is only one thing I would change though: the names Luca and Lucas are way too similar. I know that they are twins and J also like when the names are somewhat related, but at it got a bit confusing and in the end I just read it as if they were the same person. Apart from that, it is a fan te attic work! Definitely recommend to anyone who wants to have a good laugh!!! GOOD JOB!

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Good Story!

Great story! The plot is somewhat original and thrilling. Honestly, in the first few chapters I wasn’t very interested, but as I kept reading it got so much more better. I couldn’t put the book down!! I also loved the main character’s personality growth. All in all, it was fantastic!

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Loved it!

Great story! the plot was really interesting and it for me hooked right away. There are just a few grammar and punctuation mistakes, but besides that, it is a wonderful work! Good job!

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Amazing Book!

I loved everything about it! This is actually the first book I have read on this platform and it is just amazing. I love your writing style and the plot is very original. I have to say that what I like the most was the fact that she kept almost killing him. It makes it a lot more enjoyable. Great work!

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