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Great Spinoff!

After I finished watching Kamichama Karin, and saw your fanfiction, I was totally engaged. It's a well description of each of the characters, and it also says a lot about each of them, exactly like they were in the anime. It's a thrilling fiction novel, and it's very well written. The extra characters added on was also a very good idea, and I like how if you haven't watched the anime, you can still read this book. Keep writing!

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Amazing Concept

I really really really like the idea of taking the original characters, and fixing them into something better. It's also interesting to see what the Cullens would be like, if they were indeed humans. Bella and Edward's relationship is rocky (so far) and she still has that deep friendship/sisterhood with Alice. This takes out some of the best points of the Twilight Saga, and makes an interesting spin on the series. Keep writing! Can't wait to read more!

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Great Story!

I'd say it's one of the best Twilight fanfictions I've ever read! Everything from the view of Carlisle was smart as well, so you wouldn't be limited on time. Pretty much all of the references matched the ones on the book, and I believe it was a really good book. Keep Writing! :D

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