Sarah A.

In the Gap

This is actually the first novel of this genre that I have read. I must say that the author has set bar really high! The characters are so well developed and the plot is revealed slowly in a very engaging way!

A good start

Hi! You have a good start to the story here. However, there is very little so far to comment on the plot. I will come back for another review when there's more. Going forward, I would just suggest to keep a close eye on the grammar and punctuation.

An enjoyable read

Ideally, I wanted to wait for the story to end before writing a review. But although it's been a while since the story was updated, I am going to go ahead and say that I enjoyed reading it. It's been a while since I last came across a story which I enjoyed reading multiple times. This one, I've already read twice and can't wait to see where it'll go from here.

Love the story!

This such an incredibly well thought out plot, it is amazing. The characters feel real and the way the story is told is so unpretentious, it feels like the author is actually 'telling' the story!

Nice plot!

I think you have a wonderful plot going on here. It is, however, hampered by gramma/punctuation mistakes. The writing style is actually also very nice. If you could look at rephrasing certain areas, it will be a much better reading experience (eyes sparkled by sunlight in chapter 1, poured cookies in chapter 3).

oh my god!

Generally, the one genre that I avoid is horror. Just not my cup of tea. But this one just grips you and does not let go. It was like I was compelled to complete the story! The flow in the storytelling is amazing. The only suggestion I have is that, perhaps, there should have been a bit of a lean-in into what the 'reasons' for the system were. Like a teaser, to make the reader feel that Quinlyn's story will have an explanation to the teaser...do you know what I mean?

A delightful read!

I thoroughly enjoyed the poetic style and the story! The only suggestion I would make is to proof-read.

Fast paced ride!

This is such a fast paced book! But I loved it. The plot is great, and was a really fun ride.