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a little too unevenly paced but that's ok in the long run. and a little more backstory and character development would be good. over all it got a great plot line and not to hard to follow. hope you'll be able to tie everything together in the end. can't wait for you to post the next chapter!Read the story now
great plot so lovely
it's probably the best tiwn hitman story i have read so far and that's a good thing hope you update soon.
i don't know what else to say cause all i can say is you have a good writing style you may need to do something about your scene jumps it a little confusing without something to change it with.
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