Luce Louise

Madison

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that was so baeutiul

i don't think i've read something that beautiful in a long time.
the only mase up you have in you tow of the same chapter in one spot 21 and 22 are the same. other than that its perfect great plot and timeline.

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so cool

a little too unevenly paced but that's ok in the long run. and a little more backstory and character development would be good. over all it got a great plot line and not to hard to follow. hope you'll be able to tie everything together in the end. can't wait for you to post the next chapter!

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great plot so lovely

it's probably the best tiwn hitman story i have read so far and that's a good thing hope you update soon.
i don't know what else to say cause all i can say is you have a good writing style you may need to do something about your scene jumps it a little confusing without something to change it with.

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