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Hmm...Good stuff, it is.

Wow, man. Firstly, I like your Marking concept that governs the world inside your story. However, your story proceeds quite fast without a breather or two and almost skimmed through some important details. Correct me if I am wrong, is the timeline of your story set in a pseudo-modern (kinda like our current era) magical civilisation where the Marking and the magic circles run things? Nevertheless, very good stuff you're brewing here. I need to read more before giving it the final verdict. Do watch out the pace, OK?

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Sweet. Maybe too sweet.

Frankly, it is my first time dwelling into a romantic thriller (that's gonna send all those fujoshi to cloud nine). It is a sweet start. We all know that Xavier is a sexy and alluring creature that set his eyes on our innocent but alcoholic Klein. Why knows what's gonna come between those two? Then there is the case of Xavier's wife got brutally offed. I wonder who in his/her right mind could pull that kind of stunt. Also, I believe there will be more desserts (you know what I mean) ahead. Maybe involving another new character? Like a love triangle, or even more? My condolences to Klein. Hope he survives that juicy sweet temptation. One thing for sure is that it is giving me mind cavities from all these sweetnesses that are to come.

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