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Eclipse: The Beginning

I've only finished the first chapter so far but I can tell this is going to be a great, and far-reaching story. The writer not only brings the main character and his personality to life but manages to convey the depths of his pain and sense of being fundamentally different. The story seems to be on the darker side of fantasy so far, but it is written very well and I look forward to reading on!

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I LOVE LOVE LOVE the premise of this story. The prologue is wonderful and draws you in, making you want to start reading the book just to find out more. The writing and dialogue are great and keep a good pace. My only recommendation is to fix some of the punctuation. Otherwise, no joke, this is going to be a bestseller. I can't wait to read more from the author!

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A Sudden Change

So far, I'm totally in. This is a good beginning to what I think is going to be a good story. If you want help with the grammer or punctuation let me know. The important thing is always to get the story down, and I can tell it's going to be good. I'll continue reading as you post chapters.

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