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Well...here goes nothing...I love reading and I fancy myself to be a 'good writer' :-)...hopefully the bubble doesn't burst! But...all in good time.

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Cracking start

OMG! What an absolutely cracking start to a story! I'm definitely going to wait for updates on this one. Just one thing to look out for - the line breaks are in weird spots, mid-sentence which makes it very hard to read. If you can clean it up before publishing, that will be great. Overall, an amazing start and look forward to seeing how the plot unfolds.

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Nice going!

The story has started off really well. I’d like to know what happens next. One thing you should remember is to watch the tenses. You tend to flit between past and present. Other than that and a bit of grammar, I will wait for the next update!

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A good start

The first chapter is really great, and the dynamic narration continues through into the following chapters, with the parallel stories of Celeste and Elliot. There are some grammar / punctuation errors...which can be fixed easily when you go back to the story to edit.

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love this!

I am loving how this story has started out! I agree with one of the other reviewers though....that you could make a lot more out of introducing all the fantastical creatures. But overall, a great story!

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Interesting start

The story is instantly captivating and makes you want to read. The love triangle is shaping up into an interesting mix, making you want to read more and find out how things shape up for the three of them. The characters feel real! Nice one. Thank you for sharing!

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A well developed plot

This is an intricate, well-developed plot where there's a lot happening and certainly not in a bad way. The grammar and jumbled tenses are a little bit off-putting, but this is a vampire story with a difference which is worth reading.

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A refreshing read

This is such a refreshing little read. Very well written, with real, well-developed characters and an amazing way with words. It was awesome!

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Interesting start

This is an interesting start to a story. It's refreshing to read a werewolf story that is not all about the alpha wolves. I'm looking forward to finding out what happens next with Cora and Finn! 💕 💕

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An absolutely amazing read!

I loved reading this story. It's a sweet, slow-burn romance that has been executed perfectly. The story and the author's writing style keeps the reader hooked throughout and there's never a dull moment in the story. The characters are rich and well rounded, and I'm off to read other stories by this author.

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I love the story

I've yet to read the whole story, but I've loved it so far. The author's writing style is very engaging as is the plot and the pacing. I'm definitely looking forward to reading the whole story!

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Interesting plot

The plot is interesting and coming along really nicely. As most of the reviewers have already mentioned, it does a bit of editing, but the author has a unique voice, which is enjoyable to read. I look forward to seeing how everything unfolds.

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Well developed plot

At the cost of repeating what almost everyone before me has said, your plot is really interesting but needs quite a bit of editing in terms of grammar and punctuation. But hey, we have to start somewhere, right? The rest is a matter of practice and study! Good luck :-)

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Oh, WOW!!

This is one the few stories here with very, very few grammar errors. That in & of itself is a pleasure to read. Add to that, the writing style is enjoyable. The plot hasn’t yet progressed far enough to comment phone, the story has me hooked in. I look forward to reading more.

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Well developed plot

I've enjoyed reading this story so far. As quite a few readers have pointed out, if you concentrate more on showing us, rather than telling and a few grammar mistakes that've creeped in, it'll be an even more enjoyable read. I look forward to reading how it progresses.

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Quick paced.

This is not a genre I usually. But this story is fast paced. The chapters are way short, but it works for this story. Quick and punchy - these two words pretty much describe everything in this book, from the characters to the chapter length to the writing style. I hope you finish the story!

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Amazingly well written

I have fallen in love with this story. The characters are incredibly engaging and real. You have gotten in each one's head and drawn them out so well! I cannot wait to see where this goes.
I should have given 4 stars for grammar and punctuation, as there are some issues, especially early on in the story...but I loved it too much to focus on that. It will be great if you could fix those though.

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This is such a good story!

I loved reading this story to the end! The plot is fantastic, as is the writing style. The only suggestion I would make is that sometimes the change in timelines (now and then) seems a bit too quick. And of course, a few typos/grammar issues.
But overall, it is a great read!

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I am hooked!

I am really liking how this story is turning out. There is really very little to complain about :-)! But, if I were to pick one thing, it would be that the first few chapters seem to progress a tab too slow. However, because of the writing style, one is still inclined to keep reading!

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