sdaniel325

Somewhere Over The Rainbow

Just a girl trying to spread diversity through writing ✨

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I would recommend this story to anyone who likes a good mystery and the paranormal. The tone of the story is well written with the exception of a few grammatical mistakes, but it’s okay. I like the way the plot is aligned and well written! You’re doing great!

I like the way the scenes roll all together, the punctuation could use some fixing, hell even my own work can use some help, but overall I like the way the story is told.

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The Wolf That Cried for Help

I like how the plot is headed, all I could really comment on, is the punctuation. It’s okay, I make grammar mistakes too, it’s just something to be on the look out for when writing. I would suggest to add some commas here and there, and cut some sentences shorter. Other than that, it’s all good! ;)

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I really like the way you set up the plot, you’re writing technique is great, and I would love to see how the rest of the story comes together!

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